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January 18, 2010 by Hawk.
Return Policy
By: Michael Snyder
I wanted to give this book two stars. There were that many things wrong with it. But I kept reading and wanted to finish it to find out what happens. For that and that alone I’m giving it three stars.
The book’s written in the first person, a technique very few authors pull off well and to me is, more often than not, detrimental to the story. The narrative also jumps from viewpoint to viewpoint, chapter to chapter amongst the three main characters of the story. This device is becoming more popular and I’ve always found it annoying. As you settle in with what Character A is doing you then jump to someone else’s viewpoint.
My biggest problem with the book is one of the main plot devices; Willy Finneran’s arrest, trial and conviction were ludicrous. They heavily draw the three characters of the book together, two would never had met otherwise, and it could NOT, ever have happened as written. It’s wholly, entirely unbelievable. It isn’t even implausible it’s impossible. As written the scene with Children’s Services is also entirely impossible. Chikd Sservices will not show up at your door, hand you a kid and say “This is yours, bye!” it doesn’t work that way. These utter impossibilities hurt the story badly for me.
As badly as it was hurt, and it took me a couple days to pick the novel back up after getting annoyed with the above twists. I DID finish reading it and I didn’t hate the novel. A bit of research, a week of watching Law & Order re-runs even, could have smoothed out the implausible parts and made it a far better story.
Three Stars
Hawk (hoping for better books)
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January 11, 2010 by Hawk.
Rowing the Atlantic: Lessons Learned on the Open Ocean
By: Roz Savage
First I have to say I respect the courage and dedication it took to complete the task of rowing across the Atlantic Ocean. That being said I just wasn’t impressed by the story. I recommend not looking at the end papers they give away the gist of the story. The writing was good but flat, the thrill, the sense of excitement and danger that should exist in such a tale just aren’t conveyed well or at all. All in all the story is rather bland and a bit boring.
I also honestly have to say I didn’t like the Roz Savage I met in this book. At an early age during a trip to California she became convinced that materialism was the solution to everything, she also became hooked on self-help and quick fix nonsense books. She carried on a year long affair while married and when the affair is exposed and her husband doesn’t toss her out she’s relieved. She then turns around and makes plans to run away and start a new life with her boyfriend. Those plans she almost immediately given up on as well. While preparing for the journey she take up with an employee of the boatyard outfitting her craft who’s half her age. At her first job she makes a simple mistake, wasting all of an hour, and she “never recovered [her] confidence”. I was also confused that all her inner voices, ’self-doubt’, ’self-critical’, ‘competitive’ and ‘guilt’ are all referred to as being male. She’s having a mid life crisis and looking for anything to fill some void she has inside her. I just wasn’t impressed with her as a person and that, more than anything, detracted from the story.
Three Stars
Hawk (was hoping for a better story)
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January 6, 2010 by Hawk.
Just got back from the dentist. Had Eight (8) teeth pulled, my jawbone scraped and shaped and a full upper dental plate stuffed in my mouth. I’m still bleeding like mad. I’m in serious pain. Because of the swelling the plate won’t fit right for several days yet so every time I open my mouth it tried to fall out. Off to a good start for this year… ugh.
Heh, just be glad I didn’t take any pictures
Hawk (near toofless…)
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January 4, 2010 by Hawk.
The Doom Machine
By: Mark Teague
Rollicking good fun! This is top notch B-Movie style science fiction. Over the top characters, situations, aliens, monsters and planets. Everything’s exaggerated but still, on some level, believable.
Perhaps a bit too ‘over the top’ in some places for adult readers (I’m one and I enjoyed the book) the characters wear their hearts, greed and for some, stupidity, on their sleeves for all to see.
This would be a great introduction into the world of science fiction stories for middle school students but beware there are some intense battle scenes that might be a bit much for younger or more sensitive kids.
The book is well bound and printed on heavy gloss stock it is also cleverly illustrated with well done artwork by the author. Well worth reading!
Four Stars
Hawk (zap gun at the ready!)
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